Editing Inquirer Work

This is my work before I go this the grammar unit. I made a lot of silly mistakes like forgot add an "s" to make it plural.

This is a short movie when I am editing my old post:

Lastly, this is my final draft:

Movie Poster of Living with Air Pollution

Air is the most important element for human to survive. We need to breathe 13.5 kg of clean air and we can only survive 1-2 minutes without air. But, unfortunately dangerous air pollution in Jakarta is comprised of particles, chemicals or biological matter thrust into the air that causes damage to the fragile atmosphere. Jakarta is now known as the most polluted city in Asia. In this documentary, we provide the information of how pollution started, and most importantly we give the solutions of how to make the world a better place to live.

If you want to see my reflection, click here